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MLP/EQG Bimbo Thread

Comic Edition

Previous thread-https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/55457281/
Bimbo Timeline: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1_WC5SKBrHsI1LtwQuquJOsz19qtTjZwB8uYth1ATtiI/edit?usp=sharing

Alternate source for above stories:
https://mega.nz/folder/5cMmnbZY#2GiBIHHAjBWKZAS_Wg_m1w

Download archive of every pre-pastebin purge story: u.smutty.horse/lypxarkwhqy.rar

New Stories not in archive:https://ponepaste.org/4124

Snakebit's stories:https://archiveofourown.org/users/snakebit1995/pseuds/snakebit1995

Pastebin:https://pastebin.com/mhdk63Pn

https://pastebin.com/u/BimboPonyAnon

(Discontinued) green pastebin: Strip Magician:https://pastebin.com/y7MkeuMJ

Scout Story: https://rentry.org/by9eo

Trixie Writer's Story List:https://pastebin.com/8Yfj3rLy

MLP Bimbo Mirrorverse Story Lists-https://pastebin.com/2yXYWtaT

Fantasy (DnD) AU Story List-https://pastebin.com/VuFRJPpU

Gyaru CYOA-https://pastebin.com/CE88iFfD

Bimbo Luna CYOA:https://u.smutty.horse/mbmntwzbqtv.txt

AI Voices:https://pastebin.com/XLmtYPkT
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>>55771741 (OP)
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>>55772312
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>>55772330
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>>55772343
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Still briansotrming on Fantasy AU, have a doc opened but have been busy with IRL stuff and other storeis so it's kinda fallen to the back burner

Plus like I said in the multithread and heat and allergies near me don't have me in a very inspired mood lol
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[CYOA Changeling quest] - https://rentry.org/uqcnt

Here's the chapters of the changeling quest wrapped up in one link. 

I'm going to continuie in but maybe not tonight as am am big tired. Currently with Nightmare Moon and Spoiled Rich.

I have an rough idea of how it's going to go but if anyone has any thoughts they want to throw out feel free.
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>>55774471
hm, what if she makes them fall asleep and then influences them through their dreams as she speaks to them, as dream influence is something she does as her mlp coutnerpart
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https://nitter.privacydev.net/Annon35711324/status/1646921259224104960
>Big Bimbo Bully Brawl (Full Comic)
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>>55776248
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>>55776253
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>>55776264
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>>55776272
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>>55776279
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>>55776289
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>>55776292
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>>55775723
Never notuced Velvets legs have sharp nails/claws. Cool.

>>55776289
Uhh, I love the concept. Sunny suing her manipulative skills for good.
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>>55776296
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we got a real cutie
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>>55778712
What's her name?
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>>55778914
I honestly have a hard time finding out, just found her on the gameloft tag
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>>55774471
>I'm going to continuie in but maybe not tonight as am am big tired.
Rest well.

>I have an rough idea of how it's going to go but if anyone has any thoughts they want to throw out feel free.
One thought would be to have Nightmare make a call to "find out where Tiara is," (read; set things up) and then take her parents to her before having her be the one to enslave them.

>>55775723
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/54677586/#54750847
I just had the thought that a pic taking place shortly after could be really interesting, based on this blurb.

Also, I fucking love it when pics have blurbs like this.

>>55776784
>Never notuced Velvets legs have sharp nails/claws. Cool.
Honestly, that's always been one of my favorite bits of it. I assumed they were part of her outfit, though.

>Uhh, I love the concept. Sunny suing her manipulative skills for good.
Wish we had more stuff with her manipulating herself into furthering bimboness.

>>55778914
>>55779009
https://derpibooru.org/tags/telegram+pony
Doesn't seem to have one yet.
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>>55779715
Feel like Aria's boobs are way too big here
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>>55780692
All the boobs and butts in this one are too big for me personally. Not that it’s a bad piece, just personal taste.
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>>55781342
I think AJ and Adagio are well proportioned

Aria just had boobs bigger than the rest of her body that makes it look weird
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>>55772366
No real idea for fantasy.mkstly thinking about have Vinyl, Diamond and Silver in the story.
Maybe have sex chapter with Celestia or something with Cadance.

For quest or something, mostly thinking about a snowy mountain to get the girl react to the cold or an haunted house.
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>>55778712
https://derpibooru.org/tags/golden+hooves+(g4)
Reminds me of this character
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>>55781775
Yeah I have no major ideas either
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Would love to see more of the Mane Six as MILFs
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>>55784829
Was going to suggest that you sugfest that for mother day, but May will be a pokemon month.
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>>55784829
I'd like to see the CMC as MILFs
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>>55775723
This is really cute and velvet has given me a taste for bimbo milfs/catgirls now.
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>>55781658
Relative to one another, yeah. But if you try and imagine them standing up, they're like, ridiculously huge. If you like it, cool, just my thoughts.

>>55785519
We do have plenty of MLP milfs. Catgirls, maybe some of those monstergirl pics? Maybe? Those pics are definitely milfs though.
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>>55784829
On the other end of the spectrum; I'd like to see young versions of the MILF Six.
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>>55785871
I’d be fun if velvet was like twilight 1.0 in size, just to hit super puperty in a very short time-frame
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>>55785916
Behold
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>>55785939
Just thinking about this, but we got a lot of Velvet pics. Just wondering why people love Velvet over others moms, like Windy Whistles?
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I find the world changes from pink world style bimbofication waves really interesting. I wanna see more stuff exploring how culture and stuff changes along with it.
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>>55786064
She has hot librarian vibes, stern but affectionate. It's also the hair.
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>>55786064
All I can say for sure is that she's Annon's favorite MILF.
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>>55786116
wasn't there some really good milf harem stuff with her?
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>>55786135
Yes 
https://derpibooru.org/images/2601134?q=artist%3Aannon%2C+Twilight+Velvet

https://derpibooru.org/images/2698031?q=artist%3Aannon%2C+Twilight+Velvet
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>>55786330
I know I'm supposed to find this hot but my autistic brain immediately goes 
>woah, hair soft :)
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>>55779715
Nice pic. One of the sad things about having so many pics is that good one like this get lost with by the sear number of pics
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>>55780576
>Also, I love it when pics have blurbs like this.

Sad thing about the e hentai archives is that we can’t get blurbs like that.
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>>55784722
Thinking about milf, I think we never had any pin up pic of Spoiled Rich. I don't remember seeing any about her.
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>>55785868
I think it's just her arms that make it look weird.
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https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2023/1/20/3030209.jpg
Saw this pic, wanted to link it.

>>55786064
I think someone really likes commissioning pics with her.

>>55786090
I find that interesting, too. Not just with Pink World, though.

>>55786662
You can on other sites, though. DA, Twitter, DB, Tumblr if that comes back. Also, you can do stuff like this.
derpicdn.net/img/view/2021/12/20/2768560.png


>>55788290
https://derpibooru.org/search?q=*bimbo*%2C+spoiled+rich
She's had a few focused on her by different artists. Also, I don't know about anyone else, but looking at that Pink World pic makes me want full refs of all the bimbos in it.

>>55788829
Maybe? I was looking more at the head and torso when trying to figure it out.
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>>55789042
>She's had a few focused on her by different artists. Also, I don't know about anyone else, but looking at that Pink World pic makes me want full refs of all the bimbos in it.
Yeah, but Annon never did a pin up with Spoiled. They did some pics with Spoiled, but it was lile the Morrorverse or sex pics.
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>>55789431
https://derpibooru.org/images/1388128
I’d say this is pretty damn close. Some of the ones with her and Tiara should probably count, too.
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>>55774471
Clear Lake strode in on tall, midnight blue heels that scaled up her long, pale legs, laced tightly all the way up her shins and ending just above her knees. The tops of them connected to a set of matching blue/black garters that framed her plush pale thighs and thick ass. A lacy blue nighty in the shape of a leotard barely concealed her tall, athletic body, her nipples pressing against the black lace. A silver tray sat in her gloved hands, the gloves embroided with a beautiful illustration of a night sky extended up and around her toned arms.

In a mimicry of Nightmare Moon, artful glyphs were also painted under one of her eyes and on the other cheek, her long silver hair hung in an ass length ponytail that hung *straight* down, swaying in time with her hips.

There was absolutly no indication that this tall, toned woman, with eyes of grey ice had at one point been a desperate, homeless run away before Nightmare Moon had found her. 

She gently set down the tray, lifting the lid to reveal a bucket, full of ice and a single, long necked bottle of clear, liquid. It steamed slightly, condensation dripping off the side as Clear Lake picked it up and smoothly poured the ice cold liquid into three clear glasses.

She bent at the waist to do so, her silk garter straining slightly as the leotard pulled tight into her ass yet she didn't break her posture, the high cheekbones of her elegant face, her black painted lips and eyes totally neutral as the Moonshine poured into the glasses.

The ice was merely for show, to distract the observant from the fact that the liquid was already ice cold, no matter what the temperature.

Most likely a by-product of it being made out of pure magic, a dash of The Farm's special milk, some rye grain and Luna's cunt juices after she finger blasted herself to orgasm at the fantasy of an army of worshiping slaves and sheer delight of her newfound power!
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>>55794762
'Will there be anything else Miss Moon?' Clear Lake said, her soft voice smooth and subserviant, body perfectly poised.

'No, Clear Lake, we can manage by ourselves now.' Nightmare Moon reaches up a pale, long nailed hand and cups Clear Lake's cheek, finally breaking the other woman's poise as she bites her lip and *squeezes* her thighs together, her grey eyes flitting up as they meet Moon's black and blue ones.

*'Good Girl.'*

She pats Clear Lake softly on the cheek before waving her away in dismissal. Clear Lake bows and leaves with as much elegance as she can muster, only wobbling a little bit as her pussy throbs.

'Now-' Nightmare Moon says, taking her glass before sliding the other two over to the husband and wife, her eyes focused entirely on Spoiled,

'-How about we have a nice drink, and you tell me what you want!' She raised her glass and tilted it to her lips, drinking in the liquid, her long pale throat working as she savoured the biting yet smooth taste of the beverage. Despite the refreshing chill of the drink, she instantly felt her body heat up. Not just the warm burn of alcohol but the *hot* inferno of *need.*

Spoiled gave Nightmare Moon a smug, satisfied look, obviously thinking that her and Nightmare Moon were now on the same page of a book Spoiled was the author of. She knocked back the glass of Moonshine, swigging it down with the ease of a dedicated drinker.

As many socials and parties that Spoiled Milk invites herself to probably does strengthen the constitution if they all serve booze, Nightmare Moon supposed...

Filthy too a more sedate approach, swirling it around before taking a small sniff before a sampling sip, letting the clear liquid roll over his tongue then grunting softly in pleasure and arousal as his cock began to swell in his pants again.
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>>55794774
Spoiled eye's widened, her thigh thighs pressing together before spreading, her eyes fluttering as she lets out a long, satisfied exhale and Nightmare Moon grinned behind her cup, delighting in the knowledge that not only were the two greedily sucking down her own essence, but most likely some of their own daughter's *contribution.*

Yes, by all accounts, Diamond Tiara was The Farm's *best* milkcow. Even better than Applebloom, much to Applejack's chagrin and dissapointment.

"Hopefully", Nightmare thought as she leered at Spoiled's chest as the woman fanned hersel, unbuttoning some of the buttons on her tight, pink shirt, "Like Mother, Like Daughter..."

She leaned forward, elbows on desk and her tall powerful body looming over the two of them as she slumped down in their chairs, eyes fluttering and legs spread.

'Tell me what you *want.*'
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>>55794795
NIce foreshadowing with using DT as comparison
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>>55797189
>>55797359
Who is the best mlp geisha? Jubilee, Sunset or Trixie?
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>>55797452
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>>55794795
'I've told you.' Spoiled says, slightly breathless, a few strands of dark purple hair falling infront of her flushed face as she holds her empty glass out for another pour. Nightmare Moon obliges, leaning forward and grinning as she notices Spoiled's eyes flick down to her pale breasts for a second before she clears her throat,

'We want to know where our daughter is!' Spoiled huffs before taking another gulp of Moonshine and moaning, her hand dropping to rest on the leg of her trendy trousers, rubbing slowly, she goes to say something else but Nightmare Moon leans over and places a *finger on her lips!*

The finger glistens, a bead of liquid dripping off it's long black nail and Spoiled's tongue darts out instinctivly and-

'Oooh~' She gasped, it tasted like more of the wonderful drink but much...stronger!

'No.' Nightmare Moon purred, running her other hand through Spoiled Milk's expertly styled hair, 

'That's what you *say* you want but what do you *really* want?' 

Nightmare's voice as smooth as dark chocolate as she slid her finger into the other woman's mouth, her dress falling away as she raises her long, powerful leg up onto her desk, exposing her dripping wet pussy, leaking a silvery, glowing fluid.

'We want our daughter back!' Filthy exclaims, standing up sharply, shaking off the effects of the Moonshine, despite his cock still bulging against his pants.

Sigh.

She probably *would* have to come to a compromise with Applejack and The Farm. She wasn't going to sway Filthy any other way.

For now though...
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Dark, silky smooth tendrils emerged from the shadows behind Filthy and enveloped him, wrapping around his legs and arms and mouth before hoisting him silently into the ceiling. He tries to call out but his suprised yelps are muffled by the dark, roiling tendrils of starry void. He wriggles and strains to no avail, the tendrils impossibly strong and as he soon finds out, incredibly pleasing to touch. Goosebumps break out across his body wherever the silky ribbons touch and his silent cries of alarm soon turn to muffled gasps of pleasure as the tendrils prove to be very curious and very playful!

He wiggles as they try to get into his pants and under his shirt before the smoky substance slides up his pant leg, around his thighs and up...

Spoiled doesn't hear her husband get snatched but she catches the movement out the corner of her eye and goes to turn before Nightmare moon softly *grips* the back of her head and gently guides the rich woman's gaze back onto her own.

Nightmare Moon grins, eyes glinting as the woman goes doe eyed, all bravado and smugness lost as she sucks on Nightmare Moon's finger! Nightmare Moon slides it out, slowly guiding it back to her own quim and sliding it in, swirling it around in her tight pussy as she purrs,

'Now, Tell me. What do you *really* want?'

Spoiled blinks slowly, most of her mind fuzzy apart from the bit that eagerly supplies the answer to the powerful mare's question. The part that had driven her since she was a child. The ambitious, eager, ruthless part.

'Power~' She breaths, eyes sparkling with avarice, 'I want *power* I love *power!'*

Nightmare Moon grinned, her teeth flashing in the gloom. 

Good. She could *work* with this!
[Small ones today, hopefully get a few more out]
[aaaaand been ip banned again...]
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>>55798090
oooh loving that answer, very curious to see where this is going! And for sure, enjoy the weekend
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>>55798090
I love your writing so fucking much.

Have you considered posting it elsewhere? FF.net, AO3, FimFiction? Because it definitely deserves more eyes on it.
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>>55798090
or just go to this website called CHYOA.com
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I'm working on more scenes for the Pie Family Horror Story. I'm wondering if the scenes might be enough to make the 'dinner scene' it's own chapter. 

Also where should I go in terms of the scene from here. Like once Tiny is Himbofied, what should be the denoument where the Pie's leave the room? 

Working backwards, it should be Search-Light gets out of the rope tying him to the chair (I though of a real funny way to do that right now, he struggles against the rope only to realize the Pie's tied it very poorly and lazily and it just falls around him), before that Maud leaves to go get a coat, and before that the other pie's leave Maud with Search-Light (another line popped into my head just now- 'Maud: You don't have to worry about me, the others like to play games. I don't like to play games. Search-Light: What, like Monopoly? Maud: ... Yes. Like Monopoly). 

So I don't see where to go to get to where the Pie's are done with Tiny and file out of the room. Maybe I should just do a brief time-skip. Just imply a good length of time has passed, because I don't want to switch all the pie's in a bunch of different sex positions, it'd be a lot of work with no story payoff ballooning the length, and also I think it'd be pretty boring, since it'd be just more of the same.
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An exclusive pic for you (cause Deviantart can't show penetration, though I can insinuiate it)
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>>55799427
You can always just have the MC getting knocked out and brought somewhere.
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>>55799828
Maud really looks like she's enjoying herself
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>>55798599
[Maybe at some point, I'd have to format and edit it first and I'm not sure if I have the patience!]

>>55799055
[Already have an account. I'll shill myself as you brought it up:
https://chyoa.com/user/Dlork%20]
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>>55800340
YOU ARE DLORK THEN DLORK!!!
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So I'm going to just try writing the scene, and see where I get to, I think I'll just do the whole mini-timeskip when the Pie's are done with Tiny at the end. 

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Pinkamena: Wakey-wakey~ *giggle*
Search-Light: *grumbling* H-huh? What happened? Where am I? What's going on? 
Pinkamena: Well in order, you fainted, the kitchen, and hopefully an orgy! 
Search-Light: Wait, I'm tied up! I've been kidnapped! You can't keep me here! Let me go! What's an orgy!?

Cloudy Quartz: Pinkamena stop playing with your food, join the rest of us. 
Pinkamena: Coming mother! 
Search-Light: Who- who are all of you? What are you? 

Before Searchlight were four extremely curvaceous women, their skin was pale from lack of sunlight, and they wore dark makeup on their faces, their clothes clung tightly to the contours of their bodies. The way their eyes gazed into his soul reminded Search-Light of the look of a pack of lions that hasn't yet decided to pounce on him. 

Cloudy Quartz: We're the Pie Family. You and your little friends went and broke into our house. 
Search-Light: We-We're really really sorry! I told them it was a bad idea! Please let us go, we won't bother you again!
Cloudy Quartz: Oh well, it's our fault for sleeping in so late and leaving the door unlocked. But that's what you get you're fucking nonstop through the night I suppose. Anyway we figured we'd be good hosts and show you our hospitality. First of all we should introduce ourselves, I'm Cloudelia Quartz nee Pie. These are my daughters, please introduce yourselves girls. 
Pinkamena: *insane giggle* I'm Pinkamena Diane Pie! *menacingly* Nice to meet you. 
Marble: M-Marbalonious Suzanne Pie. 
Cloudy Quartz: Speak up dear, we can barely hear you. 
Marble: Y-Yes mother...
Maud: Maudline Beth Pie
Limestone: Limelia Stone Pie. *whispers* Bitch.
Cloudy Quartz: And you are? 
Search-Light: Extremely confused. Also scared.
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>>55799828
Have you looked into sites that do? Patreon, maybe? It does let you make public posts.

Or heck, just post them on derpibooru.

>>55800340
>[Maybe at some point, I'd have to format and edit it first and I'm not sure if I have the patience!]
You could always look for an editor to do it for you.

[Already have an account. I'll shill myself as you brought it up:
https://chyoa.com/user/Dlork%20]
NTA, but I’ve been meaning to mention, you have a lot of great stuff on there too.
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>>55801155
Cloudy Quartz: Well Mr. Confused, you don't have to worry, me and my girls are going to take GOOD care of you. 
Search-Light: *nervous laughter*
Cloudy Quartz: My daughters have already made the rest of your friends nice and company, but we've gotten mighty horny already coming up with ideas for all the naughty things we're about to do, and well, you know what that means. 
Search-Light: ... No, I don't. 

Cloudy Quartz: Come on girls, time to dig in! 
Pinkamena: Yay! 
Limestone: About fucking time. 

With that the women quickly started stripping, and advancing towards Tiny's body lying still on the kitchen table. 

Search-Light: Ohmigod you're cannibals! Don't eat him please! I mean I know Tiny could lose a few pounds but not like this!

Pinkamena: *giggle* We're not cannibals silly! but then again, bon-apetit!

Pinkamena swiftly stripped Tiny of his underwear, and his manhood swiftly became erect under Maud's touch. The two began rubbing their tongues on his man-meat no doubt savoring the taste before they would begin to eat the rest of him in their hillbilly cannibal dinner.
>>55801170
Yeah, I can probably post that on derpibooru. I don't mind the censorship on Deviantart too much. There are a few scenes where I think adding a bunch of 'fluids' (also not allowed) would enchance a scene, but it mostly means there's extra effort I don't need to do in most scenes, and otherwise I can pretty much pull off anything else I want to do. Besides- Koikatsu doesn't really have like a 'insert penis into vagina' mechanic, at least in the studio which I use to make the scenes. Like funnily enough, Tiny's penis was sticking out of Pinkie Pie's back in an earlier version of that same pic and I had to scooch her back to hide it. So getting penetration to look right is tricky anyway.
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>>55801454
Nice talk about cannibals. Actually reminds me of the most recent stuff in Limbus Company... Well upcoming really.
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>>55801454
The Matron of the family stripped off her dress, and clambered upon the table, eying tiny like a pirate might look at a ship laden with treasure. Clearly her daughters took their cue from her, as each kept one eye on her and where she was in the room, even as Pinkie Pie and Maud focused on tasting and sucking upon Tiny's erect cock.

Cloudy Quartz: Okay girls, thanks for getting him ready. Now make room for me. Limelia, you sit on his face. 
Limestone: Fucking finally! 


Search-Light sat rigid in fear at the scene before him. He wondered at why they were each removing layers upon layers of clothing, before realizing that these must not be hillbilly cannibals. Instead they must be a clan of witches, and this was some sort of demonic ritual they were performing on Tiny! 

Search-Light: You'll never get away with this!!
Cloudy Quartz: Marbalonius, you go comfort our dear guest, he looks like he could use a hug...
Marble: B-But mother, I was hoping that this time I could-
Cloudy Quartz: Now dear. 
Marble: Yes mother...

Under the ministrations of the Pie family, Tiny finally stirred. 

Tiny: Huh? What's going on? Search, is that you? 
Search-Light: Praise the Sun! Tiny you're okay! Quick you gotta get up and get us out of here! 
Tiny: What's going on, it feels like I've got two very needy puppies trying to get my attention...
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>>55801827
Search-Light: There are these witches and you're about to be sacrificed, and like we need to get out of here right now and find the others and-

Just then Limestone planted her ample ass on top of Tiny's barely conscious face. 

Limestone: Nobody was fucking talking to you meatstick! Now shut up, your voice is fucking annoying!
Searchlight: Please don't demonically sacrifice my friend! He's a good boy! 
Limestone: I said fucking shut up! 

She wiggled her fat fanny into Tiny's face more to reinforce her point as Search-Light was helpless to watch.

As Search-Light sat in helpless horror as the witches worked their evil magics upon him. One of the witches, Marble timidly came up behind him, resting her bountiful bosom upon his head, laying her hands on his shoulders. 

Marble: D-Don't worry... You'll get to have fun soon too... 

Her words chilled Search-Light's blood as the demonic ritual continued.
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Guy! Great News! I have found Twilight Sparkle's long lost twin sister! She somehow fell through a dimensional portal and ended up in the Naruto Universe.
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>>55802171
Are you not making a joke? Is that an actual naruto character?
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>>55802171
I heard someone say she's supposed to be a fusion of Twilight and Stocking from Panty and Stocking.
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>>55802213
>>55802255
Yep, her name is Eida. She a Cyborg apparently.
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>>55802213
https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Ada
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>>55802213
Boruto's character
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>>55802303
Huh. Wasn't Naruto set in a feudal period or something? I just remember lots of old Sengoku I would say period stuff.
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>>55802135
The mass of female bodies continued to writhe over Tiny, they moaned rhythmically, acting as a multi-headed hydra, working their evil magics, gyrating and rutting against the mans form. 

Marble sensed poor Search-Light's terror, and slowly stroked his hair as she in turn grinded against his chair, whimpering slightly as she enviously looked upon her familys satanic ritual. 

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How do you right sex scenes? Like it's hard to describe what's going on when characters aren't switching positions. I can't just go 'oh they put the penis in the vagina and then the humped for a bit and came'.
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>>55802299
Oh of course she fucking is.
>>55802459
It was always meant to be a weird mish-mash timeless era. I mean you look at the hidden village and they have massive steampunk pipes everywhere, not something 17th century Japan was known for, alongside a lot of more modern clothing, Naruto wears a jumpsuit with a lot of pockets, their sandals clearly aren't 17th century sandals, the land of waves arc was about villagers trying to build a modern suspension bridge, and in the Chuunin examns they have tv's displaying the scores and they used big radio back packs with tiny earphones. 

I also remember one of the movies about a land of snow featured a train, with one absolutely ridiculous bit where there's a gatling gun that shoots out a wall of kunai knives instead of bullets. 

Still, it always felt more like it was a steampunk era of technology, but Boruto features a lot more modern setting, with Borutu eating hamburgers at a fast food place (I actually like that because burgers are his favorite food, not ramen, because he isn't Naruto, he thinks Ramen is lame and doesn't get why his dad is hung up at eating at this old ramen stand), they have skyscrapers in the hidden village, and one of Boruto's classmate has a laptop he uses to hack.
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>>55802459
No, it's an anachronistic stew, you can have a feudal system but at the same time you have modern things like fridge.
At the end of the manga Naruto was using a computer, and there were buildings behind the Hokage sculpture
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>>55802630
>>55802639
Huh. 
>>55802525
Hmm, the way I've seen it done is to describe the character's thoughts the flavoring if you will.
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>>55802760
Oh by the way, Ramen which of course is a big plot point in Naruto only became popular in Japan after WW2, becoming mainstream in the 80's I think. We tend to think of Ramen as Japanese, it's actually Chinese, with it becoming popular amongst Japanese Soldiers when they were stationed in Taiwan and parts of China before the war, and then during the war. 

So for reference it'd be like seeing a hot-dog show up in a medieval fantasy world. Sure, they had wheat to make hot dog buns, and they had pigs to make sausages, but they didn't eat hot-dogs back then. 

Anyway, I'm trying to write the narration from Search-Light's point of view to reinforce the horror aspect, without overdoing it and completely excising the sexy aspect. And I don't think I really want too delve deeply into the minds of the Pie's
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>>55802255
I mean, Stocking herself looks like a humanized Twilight.

>>55802525
>How do you right sex scenes? Like it's hard to describe what's going on when characters aren't switching positions. I can't just go 'oh they put the penis in the vagina and then the humped for a bit and came'.
Yeah, you can't really if you're doing a script style thing like you have. It's less about the actions, more about what the character is feeling, emotionally speaking and conveying that to the reader.

>>55802989
>Anyway, I'm trying to write the narration from Search-Light's point of view to reinforce the horror aspect, without overdoing it and completely excising the sexy aspect
So you're going for an erotic horror feel, then? Hot, but with a sense of wrongness, subtle or otherwise? I can link some examples that do it well.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/63742/shadow-unto-crystal
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/113926/her-body-was-cold
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/157839/fall-of-equestria-fall-of-cadence
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/22885/path-of-discord
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/19217/twilights-gradual-descent-into-sluttiness
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/409912/her-way-with-words

Tried to put them in an order to show how useful I think they are for that.

>>55803633
Damn I love scorpdk's shit. Wish he did more pony stuff nowadays.
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>>55798090
Nightmare Moon took another slow swallow of her Moonshine while curling her finger inside her cunt before sliding it out and slipping it once more back into Spoiled's mouth who suckled on it desperatly, her lips already plumping nicely.

'Go on...' Nightmare Moon prompted to Spoiled, whose hands were currently groping her breasts, property fading as her pussy soaked. Dark tendrils, much like the ones that bound Filthy descended around Spoiled's head, carressing and stroking it, teasing her long hair out as they influence her mind.

'I want...I want people to *respect* me. To look at me and see only power and authority!' She gasped as the finger was removed before growling, hands slipping inside her shirt to better massage her breasts.

'Show me. Visualise it. *Dream* it.' Nightmare Moon hisses, pulling a long silver dildo from her draw and sliding it deep between her legs, watching as Spoiled's eyes flicker in and out of dreams! 

The tendrils *pulse*, power flowing into Spoiled and some of the fat is smoothed away from her body, her face slims down, cheekbones becoming more pronounced while her flabby gut and waist sucks in. The chair tilts back as her legs lengthen, pulling her pants tight against her legs as her hips rock back and forth.

The dark divinity shifted, moving her entire body and perching on the edge of the desk, both legs spread infront of Spoiled as the latter's pinched face grows much more beautiful, much more regal, her hair pooling behind her, weaving with the tendrils as even in her slumped position, her bearing changes.

It becomes more assured, less driven by baseless ego and instead a assured confidence supported by a keen and sharp mind as that too expands, guided by Nightmare's influence into a business and leadership mastermind!

But there was *more.*
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>>55803899
'No...That's not it.' Nightmare Moon said in a musing tone, her dark dress evaporating into black fog, exposing the entirety of her large, mouth watering body, her gargantuan breasts, her unyielding eight pack and her long, long legs. She places one on either side of Spoiled, resting her feet on the arm rests and *dragging* the chair closer, the beautiful woman now surrounded with Nightmare Moon on all sides, trapped between her muscled legs.

'That was *true* but not *the whole truth.* She slides the long silver toy out of her then gently pushes it between Spoiled's eager lips.

Spoiled lets out a gutteral *groan* as she falls *deeper* into Nightmare's grasp, diving in eagerly, chasing her selfish dreams which Nightmare then *tweaked* in her favour,

Nightmare Moon had *no* idea why her Pony counterpart had been so highstrung about people sleeping during the night. When people were sleeping was when they were most vunrable, most in her *grasp.*

If *she* had been trying to take over Equestria, she would have had *Princess* Celestia soaking her cunt every night, waking up *desperate* to go back to sleep, to dream and to have her loving sister *take care of her!*

To be fair, that *was* what she was doing with *her* sister. Only a bit. She wondered if Daybreaker had noticed how horny she got every time she thought of submitting to her younger sister. Her eyes flicked to the orgasm counter and she licked her lips.

Soon.

She snatched a quick glance up at Filthy Rich, who was almost totally enveloped in darkness, hugging his body like a glove as she fed his own desires back into him although, there was precious little to twist with his objective.

He wanted to save his daughter.

He was going to as well.

He just needed to fuck Nightmare Moon to do it.

And probably Applejack...

And maybe a Stripeling or two...
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>>55803986
She fed these challenges into him, into his mind and he accepted them. Despite his resistance to her overt efforts, his dogged determination was letting Nightmare Moon direct him down the *preferable* path.

Between Nightmare Moon's legs.

He grunted, body swelling within his smoggy shroud, his skinny form filling with muscle, dusky skin tightening as power surges into his body, thick powerful arms struggle against his bonds while his broadening shoulders begin to tear his suit jacket apart. He grits his teeth and groans as a meaty cock *pops* free from the smoggy shroud, oozing pre for a second, growing several inches longer before being wrapped back up in the black tendrils.

It burst back out a moment later, even longer, even thicker and Nightmare drooled over it before it was snatched back up into the smog.

A gagging sound drew her attention back to Spoiled and she removed the silver toy, raising a dark eyebrow at the fact the already large toy appeared to have *grown* even bigger. The massive silver thing could double as a blunt object now!

She wasn't sure if it was due to her leering or Spoiled's own fellatio skill.

'Fear.' Spoiled pants, eyes focusing for a moment, locking onto Nightmare's with an *intensity* that boarded on fanatical. Her sensious lips curled into a desperate, superior sneer as her pant's *popped* open, the zip buckling under her growing body.

'I want to be *feared!*
[That's me for today. See you tommorow]
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>>55804028
that's some great showmanship with the evaporating dress, NN really has a great flare. Love how Filthy's accepting a challenge and his dick broke out of the smoke tendrils a few times almost like he's in a cocoon.

and again great build up for Spoiled
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>>55803798
Kinda like erotic-horror-comedy. 

Search-Light thinks he's walked into a horror movie, when really he's walked into a porno. That said the Pie's are kinda nuts and have made a bunch of Zombimbo's and fucked up dungeons to traverse that result in bimbofication. But to them its' just a normal saturday night.
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>>55804028
Damn, I love this so much. It's hard to pick out any particular elements, it's just so good.

I do love the bit with the dress, though, the idea that it's like smoke or fog. I'd have thought she'd use that to change it so she's exposed, rather than remove it completely though.

Also, with Filthy, I'd have thought it would be yo help his daughter. Then, twist that to "she's owned by this Hive, so the best way to help her is to help the Hive, which means serving the Queen." Not complaining, just my thoughts.

>>55804588
I meant for that particular scene, not overall.
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>>55804758
Well that scene I want the comedy to be a bit there too- you know so the Pie's don't seem too malicious. 

I might revisit writing a bit later, but I have to pick someone up in a few hours.
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>>55771741 (OP)
If I had any skills, I'd make a gif where that shot of Sunset's eye at the end flashes pink.
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>>55807861
who's the other mom? Solar Flare?
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>>55810206
No that's an OC from the Commisioner.
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Hey, I was looking for bimboponyanon's story, but his pastebin looks like it was locked during the purge. Does anyone have a link to all the chapters of his story?
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>>55822837
In the OP there is link that says
>Download archive of every pre-pastebin purge story: u.smutty.horse/lypxarkwhqy.rar

Using the link will download will a .rar (unzip with a program like 7zip or Winrar) in the uziped folder there is a folder labelled "BimboPonyAnon Stories" which has all of the stories in it.
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Trying to write more of the Pie Family Horror Story. It's easier when I'm writing in Deviantart, cause I only need a few lines between pics, and don't have to write as much transitions, whereas here it's more awkward when I only have the one picture per post to work with. 

I think I'll just cut the sex scene with the last pic I did (here) and do a small time jump to where the family disbands, then I might cap it off with Search-Light escaping, unless anyone has any suggestions or input for making the dinner scene better.
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>>55824677
Maybe Maud getting handsy with Search Light. Other than that I have nothing.
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I had a thought about Limestone that I think would be funny. 

She has her boss fight in the basement arena before going 2.0, except her 2.0 form is even shorter, which then she compensates by riding on the back of her bimbofied Nerd in her second phase. A good oppurtunity for a joke and a more natural progression.
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Maud: You don't have to worry about me. My sisters like to play games. I don't. 
Search-Light: W-What kind of games? Like Monopoly. 
Maud: ... Yes. Like Monopoly.
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>>55804028
[Sorry I haven't posted today. Was incredibly tired for some reason but hopefully will get on this tommorow!]
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Okay so I think I'll finish with the images and try writing out the rest of the chapter. I thought I should try doing a few more scenes, But I think it's more organic to stop at Maud finding Search-Light gone and starting from there for next chapter, rather than write out the beginning of Maud pursuing him.
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https://www.deviantart.com/samaster/art/Pie-Family-Horror-Story-Ch-2-958403967

Here's the full second chapter, let me know what you guys think.
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>>55830307
Something to think about, Bunnygirls with bunny masks.
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>>55822837
>>55823207
http://web.archive.org/web/20180915171657/https://pastebin.com/u/BimboPonyAnon
Also, the Internet Archive is as always, a blessing.
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Is nitter and other Twitter viewers giving other people issues?
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>>55832440
Is it just 18+ tweets or is it all of them? Because twitter appears to have changed their API recently.

There is a reason why I used a particular version of nitter here (>>55776248)
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>>55828271
Nice! gonna check it out soon
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>>55832865
Thanks, I'll appreciate it.
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>>55832550
I know, but even that version seems to be having issues.
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>>55836459
You know, I've seen the thumbnails of these so many times, never realized some of the text was English?
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>>55835385
She’s hot on so many levels
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https://e-hentai.org/g/2526273/a34d2cd95b/

Couldn’t remember if this was in the archive or not so decided to make one
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>>55804028
'I want the room to go quiet when I walk in. -Ahh!' Spoiled groaned, her lips pursing in satisfaction as she dreams of it, dreams of her ideal, perfect, selfish self. She moans as Nightmare Moon's hair slithers up her pants, the dark, prehensile locks tickling her panty clad mound. Spoiled jerks with every new pulse of magic, words bubbling up from her lips,

'I want my enemies to quake before me...' She begins to grow taller, her clothes shifting, the pink pantsuit changing into a more severe, shaper suit and skirt. Her leg's lengthen and Nightmare Moon slides her hands down them before lifting them gently onto her own legs which are still placed either side of Spoiled, the two woman forming a diamond shape, both of their drooling pussies facing eachother.

'And what else?' Nightmare Moon cooed, rubbing and massaging Spoiled's slender calves, nails trailing along her thick thighs, 

'I *want* the mere thought of me to send my lessers scurrying to obey my will, before I've even spoken it. The idea of my displeasure will be-Oooh fffuck! So good!' Spoiled squeals as Moon's hair, wrapped around the thick silver dildo slides into Spoiled's neglected pussy as the Nightmare really starts pumping magic into her.

This worked. Nightmare Moon and her sister could use an attack dog in the wider business community.

Spoiled's teeth lengthened ever so slighty, becoming fanglike, just like her new Mistresses while her features drained of any kind of compassion or mercy or warmth. Her plump lips were perhaps the only soft portion of her entire face, which was now as beautiful yet as cold as frost in the deepest of winter.

Her body was lean and toned, her mind a whizzing razor while her hair was thick, and perfectly styled, not a hair out of place even as she panted and groaned, a thick aura descended around her, both oppressive and electrifying, perfect for corralling and mentally stomping anyone Nightmare Moon needed into submission.
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>>55841983
But not quite *Eclipse Club* level mateiral. She wouldn't be on the dance stage (much) but Nightmare Moon *demanded* her servants were pleasing to look at.

'and lust after you?' Nightmare Moon said, driving the dildo into Spoiled's cunt and the woman's eyes crossed,

'Hhah'Yyeesss!' Spoiled moaned, the neckline on her blouse twitching before slowly lowering,

'Feeling all of those scared, weak sluts soak their panties when they see you, dreading the day you appear but desperate for a peek at your *huge* tits?'

Spoiled groans, her legs squeezing Nightmare's as her breasts begin to swell and grow behind her blouse. She palms and squeezes them, mauling them with long, purple fingernails as her clothes war with being sharp and severe, and also highlighting as much of her slutty body as possible.

'They'll be sooo scared I'll steal their men away from them!' Spoiled said, her tongue darting out and licking her lips, her voice a seductive purr,

'Hmmm-And they should be...Their big fat cocks are yours after all, as are their minds and their fortunes. They'll be torn between terror and lust as you wrap them around your finger!'

'Ohhhfuck-I *want* it!' Spoiled mewled, her pussy plump and drooling and *needy*, her prior leanness swallowed up by thick, gropeable plush. Wide hips, a thick jiggling ass to get lost in, barely held in in place by a tiny white skirt. It barely covered her ass and outlined everything, from her pussy to her cheeks despite (or even because of) it's sharp cut. Egyptian silk stockings, pink and purple lace hugged her long, squeezable legs.
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>>55842024
Her thick, curvacious body, heightened by the tall, wicked heels she wore, as well as the magical induced *presence* of her would ensure that she dominated any room she walked into. Be it coffeeshop, PTA meeting or business forum.

Nightmare Moon grinned, she was sure many of the complaints (the ones that didn't come from Spoiled Rich) would swiftly die out or even reverse once she sent Mrs Rich to deal with them...

A perfect attack dog indeed...

And Nightmare Moon had the *perfect leash* for the bitch. 

[Short one today, and I don't think my best work. I wanted to do more with her but I want to move on from the club. ]

[I have another section written up, although it's got very little smut in it and is quite short. I was thinking of going to The Farm first though, then posting the standalone piece after that but it depends if I get on the farm today or not.]
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>>55796368
Post the original nude edit please? Fan on expansion here.
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>>55842844
Really under rated girl
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>>55842042
Spoiled chuckled softly, her light blue eyes glowing softly, her thick royal purple hair flowing, as it twists itself into a truly imposing royal purple beehive. A few expensive golden hairpieces attempt to contain it's mass but Nightmare Moon had overdone it a little but and Spoiled's own hair had gained a portion of Nightmare's own power and now twisted and wrestled with Nightmare's, fighting for dominance.

Nightmare took that as a sign that Spoiled was still, at heart, a conniving bitch and would still present a problem for Nightmare Moon if she didn't reign the now, quite competent and very ambitious bitch in.

Fortunatly, she had a plan.

She continuied to massage Spoiled's legs, then her feet, slowly lifting off the woman's tall, wicked looking purple stilettos. She supposed she should find it demeaning but, although she would never tell anybody, Nightmare Moon loved *giving* pleasure just as much, if not more than receiving it. 

There was somthing quite satisftying about turning another person into pleading, pleasured putty with just a touch, she thought as she kneaded Spoiled's feet through the nylon of the stocking causing a satisfied moan from the rich bitch as her eyes fluttered awake.

Spoiled grinned, her white teeth glinting in the darkness as she pours herself another glass of Moonshine and leering at Nightmare with a superior, condescending fashion, unable to perceive that Nightmare was still messing with her mind. 

Nightmare was leaving a little *suprise.* Not for Spoiled, but for Applejack when this dumb slut sauntered onto The Farm and tried to bully the *true* power behind the Canterlot business scene.

With her incredible mind, her brand new "products", several new inventions from Tree and the many advantages Lady Gossamer gave them, Applejack and the Apple family was now a millionaires several times over
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>>55844000
She'd hidden it well as to avoid extra scrutiny from the single organisation that could *without a doubt* sink the entire operation.

The Tax service.

Suffice to say, No matter what she might threaten to do to Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon, Spoiled Milk was an ant to the likes of The Farm.

Applejack cared about numbers. Numbers going *up* were the best which is why Nightmare was installing this little "suprise" to *sweeten* the deal.

'So...' Nightmare Moon mused, 'Diamond Tiara?'

Spoiled snorted, idly sliding in and out with the toy as she examined her long, purple nails,
'I don't care about her! Let the Apples have her, if she's going to *lower* herself to their level by dating one of them I fail to see how she's *my* problem-'

Nightmare resisted the urge to purse her lips, 

That one hadn't come from her changes. That was *all* Spoiled Milk...

She decided she was going to put a bit more *oomph* into her suprise.

'No. What I want, is a cut of what you are making here as...a donation to the Chamber of Commerce.'

'Of course!' Nightmare Moon grins, knowing that any money she gives this stuck up bimbo, would immediatly get funnelled back into her club, laundered and clean thanks to Spoiled.

She was embedding several subliminal triggers and desires into Spoiled's head. The purple haired MILF would think she was in charge, but everything she did would benefit Gossamer and her empire in some way.

'And a free VIP membership.'

'Oh, VVIP for sure! In fact, I have a booth set of for you already and a...eager, handsome man ready to see to your every need.'

Spoiled leers, eyes rolling as her body begins to tremble, pussy squelching around the silver toy as she cums, her femcum splashing all over the chair and the floor as Nightmare Moon's apparent submission pushes her over the edge.
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>>55844017
Her curvacious body jiggles, tongue lolling out before she begins to ebb, biting her lip as she lowers her legs, sucking the giant silver toy off before actually having the *gall* to slip it into her several thousand dollar purse.

'I'm *so* glad you came around to *my* way of thinking *Miss Moon*' Spoiled said as she stood, her mighty heels compensating for her comparatively smaller stature as she shakes Nightmare's hand, their juices mingling.

Nightmare Moon almost burst out laughing as Spoiled tried to *squeeze* her hand hard. It was just so typical for the arrogant bitch to be a knuckle crusher. Still, Nightmare Moon *was* almost a goddess and she merely smiled at the petty attempt before Spoiled gave up, and slowly sucked the cum off of her hand before sniffing imperiously and walking out.

Nightmare Moon watched her fat ass sway, the tight dress riding up and exposing at least the bottom third of it, revealing the solid gold plug currently stuffed up her ass,

'One more thing. I want Filthy in return.'

Spoiled doesn't even look back, tossing her ring over her shoulder as she strides out
'Done. I don't need that wimp!'

Nightmare snorts softly, palming the ring and looking up at the roiling cocoon above her. My, it had got *very* big. The thick black ribbons of smoke were *straining*, some of them popping and splitting exposing a truly goliath figure inside. One portion tore, revealing a leg almost as thick around as tree trunk while the one around his crotch split again, his mammoth cock once more spilling out, a thick, constant stream of spunk leaking onto the floor.

Nightmare Moon holds her glass under it, catching the gooey white batter and mixing it with her Moonshine before taking a deep drink and groaning in pleasure.

'Ahh-Not ready *just* yet...' She mused, still looking at the fat diamond ring with a critical eye. It was nice, if a *little* tacky given how massive the rock on it was but that was Spoiled Rich for you...
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She makes a sympathetic little noise, reaching up and giving Filthy's cock a small tug and was rewarded with a heavy blast of white cream before she tucks it back into the writhing blanket of darkness.

Her dress returns, although much more sheer and much shorter. Instead of an elegant ballgown, not it was an inky black cocktail dress, a set of mesh, shoulder length gloves and stockings, as well as the choker gave her a distinctly more *trashy* look but this was more for her than anyone else's consumption.

Well, her and Filthy.

He was her *true* prize. If she and her sister truly wanted to compete with The Farm and their ludicrous profits, they needed a man with a mind for it.

And, if possible, a man with a cock and body big enough to pleasure both amazonian demi-goddess's at the same time.

Clear Lake pokes her head in a moment later with a refill of coffee for her Mistress. 

'How did it go My Queen?'

'About as well as could be expected. Please let the staff know that Mrs Rich is to be treated as a VVIP. For now at least.'

'Yes My Lady. And..Um...Mr Rich?' She said, distracted as a deep rumbling groan emanates from the eight foot tall cocoon, more spunk leaking through the bindings,

'Oh, he'll be...*my* special guest. You don't need to worry about him but that reminds me-' She reaches into her draw and grabbing a paper and pen, she quickly writes out a series of notes and ideas before handing it to Clear Lake,

'Please give this to Harsh Wind. He looks a little frustrated with the games your sister's are playing and this should occupy him...He owes me a favour...'

Clear Lake's eyebrows raised before adopting a look of confusion,

'Um-Forgive me Mistress but-I thought you said Mrs Milk was supposed to be a VVIP...Sending Mr Wind to...uh...attend to her seems a little extreme?'

'You're quite right Miss Lake. Well done.' Clear Lake trembles at the compliment as Nightmare continuies,
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>>55844054
'Spoiled Milk is a VVIP, but *Sweet Milk* is...an investment...Now off with you, make sure it gets done and give-' She writes another note and gives it to Clear Lake '-to Applejack or her-Hm-Grandmother at the farm when you drive Mrs Milk there after her...fun.'

Clear takes the other bit of paper, confusion across her face before she masks it, bows respectfully and scurries out.

Nightmare Moon leans back, arms behind her head and legs spread as she watches the roiling darkness above her.

Her grin widens when her sister's orgasm counter *clicks* up once again. Everything was coming up Nightmare!

[Bit ambiguous with Sweet Milk but I do have a plan for her. Essentially she's one of the *triggers* that Nightmare Moon installed in Spoiled Milk's mind but we'll see more of it when we get to The Farm.]
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>>55844087
Ooh, split personality? We really don’t have much of that.