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 # OpenFlamingo-9B-HF
 
-This is a Huggingface version of OpenFlamingo. In order to make the model support Huggingface's accelerator feature, we wrapped the original OpenFlamingo into a Huggingface model. 
+This is a Hugging Face version of OpenFlamingo. To enable the model to support Hugging Face's accelerator feature, we have wrapped the original OpenFlamingo into a Hugging Face model. You can find detailed descriptions in the [luodian/otter](https://github.com/Luodian/otter) repository.
 
-You can find detailed descriptions in the [luodian/otter](https://github.com/Luodian/otter).
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-Current OF-9B-HF model supports training with fully-sharded mechanism and loading to consumer GPUs (e.g. 3090-24G).
+The current OF-9B-HF model is equipped with the capability of training with fully-sharded mechanisms and can be loaded onto consumer-grade GPUs (such as 3090-24G).
 
 The following is original OpenFlamingo's model description.